Angst Ridden Rant! Plus a Poem.
I had a lot of freedom as a young child. I was allowed, or encouraged, to do as I pleased, where I pleased, in what was essentially a countryside environment.
So much for beginning sentences with subjects and verbs, as professed by Roy Peter Clark, in his 10th Anniversary edition of Writing Tools. It's not for me.
And now it is being suggested that my formative years are why I now always want to do things my own way, and why I don't take instruction well.
Worse still I am told that I rally against being told what to do, or how to do it; and so I choose not to argue my corner, our childhoods do form us so much, don't they.
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More to my liking is Josip Novakovich's Fiction Writer's Workshop where he says: As a writer you need a strong sense of independence, of being and thinking on your own - so go ahead, work alone... Ultimately, write in any way that gives you a sense of freedom.
Yes, those are my sort of words of advice, irrespective of subjects, or verbs, or nouns, or pronouns or adjectives; and yes, just for good measure that was a semi-colon I used, as is my want.
I have taken the writing guidance books back, they weren't mine, and most probably never will be, as long as I remain this cantankerous old sod.
Here is the poem:
Bowl
I light a candle for you
Stand it upright in the sand
That the flame flickers for you
Reminds me of your land
Also of hopefulness
And hopelessness
Of happiness
And torturedness
Into your eyes, your home
Covered by sphagnum moss
Gone are the days of freedom
Gone is the love without loss
I light a second candle
This time for the two who feed
Souls never no more together
Exactly as you might have decreed